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December 11, 2011
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:iconarmide:
TT_TT
I fail at backgrounds.... u___u'
I really need to practice that.
(At least, I try... XD )

Pencil line + photoshop (+ a texture I can't remember where I found it... :O_o: Sorry ! But I'm gonna make a new research... )

My I-should-stop-drawing-him OC, Sacha, at the age of 11 or 12 (as he was abandoned very early in his life, he had no birthday date... ^^; ).

Little explication of this scene (and pardon my english...) :
In my story, there's a very small frontier between dreams/nightmares and reality, and that is why they could become concrete. Most of the time, they appear without reason, but they also can be summoned. However, not everybody can control them.
So the spirit is a creation of his mind.....yes he's quit early for his age ! XD (or not...)

Sacha @ Me

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I request a critique because I really want to improve in scenery and background, so don't hesitate to point the wrong sides ! XD (Even if it makes me cry !.....I'm joking, don't make me cry...:P )
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Critique by *RevanRayWan Dec 24, 2011, 7:25:08 AM
Hop, on va essayer !
Tout d'abord bravo pour cette superbe compo ! J'aime beaucoup la scène, un peu enchanteresse et voir Sacha enfant une fois de plus est si mignon !

Voici les points qui me gènent un peu :
- Le pied de Sacha est étrangement tourné, c'est seulement moi ou ce n'est pas possible de tourner autant le pied en étant en tailleur ?
- J'aurais peut-être vu l'arbre un peu plus feuillu (vers la droite), plus étoffé autour de la branche

Voici les points que j'admire dans ton oeuvre.
L'arbre est splendide ! Les racines et la perspective qu'elles engendrent, les détails qui font tout le relief du tronc...
Au sol, j'aime beaucoup comment tu as su remplir de cailloux/brindilles de façon à ne pas surcharger ni laisser une étendue vide. Cet art de texturer ton sol, garde-le !!
Le petit autel au fond m'intrigue :) Je me demande dans quel genre d'endroit est-on !

Je trouve que le sorte de "flou" du fond s'accroche bien à ton dessin. ça ne le charge pas trop ! Mais peut-être tu aurais pu rajouter les silhouettes d'arbres/infrastructures s'il y en a ? (après c'est discutable... Je trouve ça très bien comme ça...)

Je n'ai pas parlé des personnages, pour moi leur anatomie et leur poses, tu les maîtrises ! (cette main de Sacha posée au sol :heart: )

Voilà, y a à prendre et à laisser, j'espère que ça t'aidera un peu !
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~Calysar Feb 14, 2012
It's nice! I like most of this. The construction of the tree seems a little odd, but maybe in a fantasy drawing, maybe it's supposed to be that way? Also I would definitely suggest a more gradual progression from green to white on the spirit's tail.
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=Armide Feb 14, 2012  Student Filmographer
Thanks a lot for your comment and advice ! ^^
Ah yeah, I'm not very good with gradual progression ! XD
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*demoonial Jan 6, 2012
nice concept and the coloring is awesome too
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=Armide Jan 7, 2012  Student Filmographer
Thank you very much ! :hug:
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*Anarloth Jan 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
L'est chouette celui là aussi !
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=Armide Jan 6, 2012  Student Filmographer
Merchi beaucoup ! Et merchi pour le fav aussi ! :iconredbullglompplz:
Je m'essaie aux décors...pas évident, mais faut bien s'y mettre un jour ! XD
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*Anarloth Jan 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
De de rien ! :)
Héhé !
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=Laitma Dec 18, 2011   General Artist
Oh wow, just incredible~ I really love the detail you put into the background actually, I think it looks fantastic! The texturing of the stones is just great~ <3
And the colors are subtle but add this great slightly faded feel to the piece, hmm~
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=Armide Dec 25, 2011  Student Filmographer
Thank you so much !!! :hug: :hug: :hug:
I need a lot more of practice, because my ideas surpass my skills ! XD
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=Laitma Dec 25, 2011   General Artist
Hah, I definitely know THAT feeling! Soooooo many ideas to draw, but I can't get them down like I want to... ;v;
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